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Zynell
7/8/13, 3:41 PM

Baksidestext.

Jag har arbetat med att skriva en baksidestext till min bok "angel in chains". Vad tycker ni om den? Är det något som fångar ert intresse? Borde jag göra om något? 

The last thing Inez expected to find inside the cave that appeared from nowhere was a chained angel, but there he was. Tall, beautiful and making her heart beat like never before.

When Inez entered the cave Aledyan first thought that he was imagining her. He has been a prisoner for over two hundred years, but she can end his torments and set him free, if he plays his cards right. Will he be able to go through with it? Will he be able to hurt her, knowing that she's also his one true love?

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Gronstedt
7/8/13, 3:44 PM
#1

Du byter tempus i andra stycket - det stöter i alla fall mitt öga. Men annars verkar det som en spännande bok 🙂.

Zynell
7/8/13, 4:05 PM
#2

Ah, tack för att du uppmärksammade det! :)

Zynell
7/8/13, 4:12 PM
#3

så, nu har jag ändrat tempus. :)

Aledyan had been imprisoned inside the cave by a warlock over two hundred years ago. When Inez entered it he knew that she could end his torments and set him free, if he played his cards right. Would he be able to go through with it? Would he be able to hurt her, knowing that she also was his one true love?

Niklas
7/9/13, 8:41 AM
#4

Jag fastnade på att första meningen var så lång. Att grottan dök upp ur ingenstans tycker inte jag behöver stå där för det är inte det som är spännande.


Vänliga hälsningar, Niklas
Är du intresserad av runstenar och runristningar?

Zynell
7/9/13, 1:20 PM
#5

#4 Ok, ska ta mig en titt på den. 🙂

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